Meech
Joined: Sep 15, 2005
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Mar 28, 2007 - 21:52 |
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Heh, it does look like foggy. To make it look more frigid you should use more of a blue/white for the base pitch. |
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JonatanRaven
Joined: Aug 15, 2005
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Mar 29, 2007 - 02:00 |
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Yeah, i'll make it more blue-ish..
There's actually a blue layer with some icy-structure that I'll just increase the intensity on..
The dugouts will be made later, so for now it's just the weather-effects I need feedback on, but yeah, they will be unaffected by the weather. |
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TBK
Joined: Feb 03, 2006
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Mar 29, 2007 - 02:48 |
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Very nice work. Even better than the first set especialy the sweltering heat ones (the top one is my favorite except that it affect the dugouts). I also love the blizard pitch as it is I can't wait to see it with the changes you proposed it's gonna be awesome. I'll be using them for sure as soon as your done .
Contructive critisism (IMO): The hole (midle top-left corner)would need something to justify it being there like a skull or a canon ball or something; otherwise i'd think about removing it or making it shallower and smaller.
Great work. |
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BloodbasherMasher
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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Mar 29, 2007 - 02:53 |
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The only weather effect that needs work is the blizzard one, IMO. You might consider transferring over the water puddles from the pouring rain field and turning them into frozen slush puddles. Also more blue and less gray should give it a snow look and not a cloud look. Currently it looks like the Bloodweiser blimp is watching the field and a cloud is in the way
Top notch work btw.
And about the sigs: Its your work do what you want. However, if people want your fields and dont want the sigs, they can just download your fields and cut out the sig. This is a small online community, and its my opinion that small things like these fields are just considered a donation to the fumbbl community; thats why when I get questions about the icons that I made in the FUMBBL pack about ownership and usage, I tell them that they can freely use them however they want. However, if they repost them online, a courtesy link back to my thread is appreciated.
I think you will make a lot more friends if you act the same way with your fields: free usage but if you repost them online a courtesy link back to this thread is appreciated.
Signatures and watermarks should be saved for professional and aspiring artists who post their work online; not this kind of stuff. You dont ever plan on making money on these things, do you?
But I reiterate: its your work, do what you wish. Just my two coppers. |
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JonatanRaven
Joined: Aug 15, 2005
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Mar 29, 2007 - 04:38 |
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TBK wrote: | Contructive critisism (IMO): The hole (midle top-left corner)would need something to justify it being there like a skull or a canon ball or something; otherwise i'd think about removing it or making it shallower and smaller. |
About the basic pitch. I will be adding more structure and details to it (such as skulls and stuff so the hole will somehow be justified.
BloodbasherMasher wrote: | You might consider transferring over the water puddles from the pouring rain field and turning them into frozen slush puddles.
But I reiterate: its your work, do what you wish. Just my two coppers. |
Yeah, will do that later.
The sigs aren't needed anymore since I have now made the entire pitch from scratch, so it's quite obvious that it's my work. That's why I made the pitch from scratch.
Now, here's the latest improvements on the blizzard pitch:
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BloodbasherMasher
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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Mar 29, 2007 - 05:37 |
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I like the middle one. |
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JonatanRaven
Joined: Aug 15, 2005
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Mar 29, 2007 - 11:31 |
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JonatanRaven
Joined: Aug 15, 2005
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Mar 29, 2007 - 16:29 |
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kemimutt
Joined: Apr 21, 2004
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Mar 29, 2007 - 16:42 |
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Awsome work. Is it much work or only short time for the dugouts to be added to the pictures? I would really enjoy playing on those as soon as the dugouts are added. |
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JonatanRaven
Joined: Aug 15, 2005
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Mar 29, 2007 - 16:47 |
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I'm not sure how much work is needed before I consider the dugouts finished. There's a few things that need to be added though.
- An opening onto the pitch
- More decorations (blood/dirt/whatnot)
- Smoothing of the sharp edges
- Possibly the "reserves/KO/BH/SI/Dead" descriptions (haven't decided yet)
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SnakeSanders
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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Mar 29, 2007 - 17:00 |
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hmmmm... how tough would it be to resize those pitches to make a BB7s pitch for weather types, a resized sand pitch for BB7s, a bridge pitch and maybe a street pitch for streetbowl?
I would use them for the VASSAL mods I am planning... and Ill also use the current ones, if i can have your permission of course!
New dugout WIP looks brilliant! |
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JonatanRaven
Joined: Aug 15, 2005
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Mar 29, 2007 - 17:09 |
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Resizing the current pitches is done in five mins or so (BB7..?).
A bridge pitch and a street pitch wouldn't be too hard I think. Same for a sand-pitch I think.
Sure thing, they're up for grabs.. |
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kemimutt
Joined: Apr 21, 2004
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Mar 29, 2007 - 17:19 |
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The dots and lines are a bit bright I think, maybe they could be a bit dulled in some way?
Edit: I think it is only the lines on the non perpect weather that are bright.
Edir2: Or even only the poring rain one. |
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SnakeSanders
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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Mar 29, 2007 - 17:27 |
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BloodbasherMasher
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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Mar 29, 2007 - 19:12 |
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You didn't ask me permission to use my large field icons in Dungeonbowl, brownrob, but you ask him permission to use his fields?!?!? How rude!
(Yes people, that was sarcasm) |
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