WhatBall
Joined: Aug 21, 2008
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:24 |
 
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| FreeRange wrote: | Take a look at Karazara while you are at it.
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Looks good to me. Maybe a more pronounced fin? Liek the current skinks have...?
Waiting on your Sharpshooter icons to clear customs...  |
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Craftnburn
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:25 |
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| zakatan wrote: | | it's a gas made of warpstone extract |
What he said |
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FreeRange
Joined: Dec 12, 2009
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:31 |
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| WhatBall wrote: | | FreeRange wrote: |
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Looks good to me. Maybe a more pronounced fin? Liek the current skinks have...? |
The head fin has to be seen from the front which would make the image too busy. Having said that I can always remove the skull, though I do like that look. |
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Craftnburn
Joined: Jul 29, 2005
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:36 |
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Isn't he just a bit too similar to  |
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WhatBall
Joined: Aug 21, 2008
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:40 |
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Sorry FR, meant lower on the back. If it doesn't work, no worries, keep the skull. |
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FreeRange
Joined: Dec 12, 2009
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:41 |
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| WhatBall wrote: | | Sorry FR, meant lower on the back. If it doesn't work, no worries, keep the skull. |
I'll see what I can do.
Here are the three versions for comparison.
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WhatBall
Joined: Aug 21, 2008
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:43 |
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| FreeRange wrote: | Sharpshooter
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Good start.
Main issue is there is not enough red on him to identify the team. Not big on the purplish fur. The gun is good, maybe you can add some of the red here? |
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FreeRange
Joined: Dec 12, 2009
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Feb 22, 2012 - 20:54 |
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| Craftnburn wrote: | | Isn't he just a bit too similar to |
I was hoping the gold skull and shoulder pads would be enough to set him off... or is this too much alike?
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Craftnburn
Joined: Jul 29, 2005
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Feb 22, 2012 - 21:00 |
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Yeah I saw the shoulder pads and color, but it just doesn't seem right that a Star isn't "more" different than a regular lineman, if you know what I mean.. What about a beaded chestplate or something.. something to distinguish him as a Star. |
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FreeRange
Joined: Dec 12, 2009
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Feb 22, 2012 - 21:08 |
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| WhatBall wrote: | | FreeRange wrote: | Sharpshooter
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Good start.
Main issue is there is not enough red on him to identify the team. Not big on the purplish fur. The gun is good, maybe you can add some of the red here? |
How is this?
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FreeRange
Joined: Dec 12, 2009
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Feb 22, 2012 - 21:09 |
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| Craftnburn wrote: | | Yeah I saw the shoulder pads and color, but it just doesn't seem right that a Star isn't "more" different than a regular lineman, if you know what I mean.. What about a beaded chestplate or something.. something to distinguish him as a Star. |
I know what you're saying, let me see what I can do.
How is this?
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WhatBall
Joined: Aug 21, 2008
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Feb 22, 2012 - 21:43 |
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Much better on both accounts. |
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Sigmar1
Joined: Aug 13, 2008
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Feb 22, 2012 - 22:13 |
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I think the gunstock should be a different color than the fur around the eyes, they seem to blend in to me.
Also, I liked the crest on Karazara #2 better than #3. |
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Kalamona
Joined: Apr 21, 2005
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Feb 22, 2012 - 23:06 |
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| FreeRange wrote: | Sharpshooter
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make it more blunderbuss like with a wider barrel at the end, after all he needs to shoot a ball out of that gun  |
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Craftnburn
Joined: Jul 29, 2005
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Feb 22, 2012 - 23:13 |
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| Kalamona wrote: | | FreeRange wrote: | Sharpshooter
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make it more blunderbuss like with a wider barrel at the end, after all he needs to shoot a ball out of that gun |
Good point.. that looks more like a Jezzail! (thank goodness those aren't allowed in BB) |
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