Johnny_KTOU
Joined: Aug 11, 2008
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Apr 11, 2013 - 00:53 |
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Amazing work... Amazing... |
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Skolopender
Joined: Jun 17, 2006
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Apr 11, 2013 - 00:57 |
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Wauv! Just Wauv! |
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Corvidius
Joined: Feb 15, 2011
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Apr 11, 2013 - 00:57 |
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xnoelx wrote: | The first DYK on page 2 gives the winners of the Necromiser as the Barrag Bruisers, rather than Barrarrag.
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I probably wouldn't have noticed tbh but nice catch. Gonna go read it all now.
Looks awesome so far. |
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Drrek
Joined: Jul 23, 2012
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Apr 11, 2013 - 01:05 |
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Ha, love seeing Begs mentioned in there. He does have a -AV now, but that goblin is gonna keep on Piling On until he dies. |
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shadow46x2
Joined: Nov 22, 2003
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Apr 11, 2013 - 02:30 |
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seriously...i don't regret handing over the reins of Stunty to Whatball a single bit...this is absolutely amazing...
on a purely selfish note though...this is another step towards me solidifying my immortality
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WhatBall
Joined: Aug 21, 2008
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Apr 11, 2013 - 02:55 |
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shadow46x2 wrote: | seriously...i don't regret handing over the reins of Stunty to Whatball a single bit...this is absolutely amazing...
on a purely selfish note though...this is another step towards me solidifying my immortality
--j |
Thanks sir. Between your own Stunt star and a mention in the DYK for Juke Joint, you're two thirds of the way there.
And thanks to everyone for the comments. xNoelx and all the other eagle eyes, greatly appreciate all the proof reading and corrections. |
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Overhamsteren
Joined: May 27, 2006
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Apr 11, 2013 - 03:08 |
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Great work! 6/6 |
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JackassRampant
Joined: Feb 26, 2011
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Apr 11, 2013 - 03:54 |
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Awesome! Thanks! |
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xnoelx
Joined: Jun 05, 2012
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Apr 11, 2013 - 03:57 |
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I'm always happy to find some way to contribute. Speaking of which, I spotted some more:
Page 37, Lorebass's entry. The start of the 3rd paragraph reads 'The best part of travelling for Lorebass was by far was the football games'. Either of the 'was'es could be deleted, I'd take out the 1st one.
Then page 38, DYK, last sentence of the first paragraph, needs a 'the' before 'Emperor's finest trackers'.
And page 39, Odster's entry, first sentence of 2nd paragraph needs an 'a' (or maybe 'the') before 'sanctioning body'. Later in that paragraph 'about their Halfling opponents imposing tree' needs an apostrophe. And later still in that paragraph, 'Goblin Line of scrimmage', 'line' shouldn't be capitalised. Finally for that paragraph 'bring the saw down' should be 'bringing'.
Same page, Puck and "Big" Pudwick's entry: 'and challenge' should be 'and challenging' or 'to challenge'. Next sentence, 'Big Pudwick' doesn't have the quotes around Big that the entry's title does. And in the sentence after that, there should be a 'the' before 'impetuous Leprechaun'.
Page 44, Windwalker's entry refers to Catachan jungles. Catachan is a 40k deathworld, not a place in the WFB/BB world.
(I had originally included all the instances of the word 'football' as errors in this post, until I realised the reason why that was being used instead of BB. Silly me.) |
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shadow46x2
Joined: Nov 22, 2003
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Apr 11, 2013 - 05:09 |
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WhatBall wrote: | Thanks sir. Between your own Stunt star and a mention in the DYK for Juke Joint, you're two thirds of the way there. |
that DYK is entirely apropos, as well.. bravo good sir
--j |
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SvenS
Joined: Jul 07, 2007
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Apr 11, 2013 - 08:14 |
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Wow, just wow! Amazing job guys! |
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Reisender
Joined: Sep 29, 2007
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Apr 11, 2013 - 09:06 |
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that, good sira, is awesome. very awesome. |
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Rabe
Joined: Jun 06, 2009
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Apr 11, 2013 - 09:10 |
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+1 |
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highelfmage
Joined: Aug 12, 2011
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Apr 11, 2013 - 09:16 |
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CCSenor
Joined: Aug 15, 2009
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Apr 11, 2013 - 10:11 |
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great stuff fellas, really well done. It makes me want to run out and spend my pocket money on all the models , get them painted and spend the summer holidays playing Stunty Leeg with my mates ( interspersed with the odd game of street cricket ) #nostalgia |
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